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Categoría: Amor

If you go away.

You say that my love is not like yesterday
That always failure, that there is no remedy
Because I have been shipwrecked In the forgetfulness of the memory.
That you have forgotten to me,
For a long time the broken heart, But still barking by you because still you are to my side. For that reason I continue living.
I know that there am to die if you go away,
Your kisses although know to ice, I prefer them thus, to that not to have them,
Not that I go to do if your I need.
If you go away no longer will be more life, The heart will let bark by you,
Not that I go to do without you. Not that I go to do with my life.
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  • Código: 226014
  • Fecha: 31 de Enero de 2005
  • Categoría: Amor
  • Media: 5.97
  • Votos: 188
  • Envios: 0
  • Lecturas: 2,547
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Fecha de alta: 16 de Mayo de 2024
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stg
invitado-stg 09 de Febrero de 2005

rigth away I noticed that you are not a native English speaker.Your poem is good thought there were some things that I wasn't able to understand becouse are not well written *-) ...or becouse you didn't use the right verb for what you intended to express, such as: " your kisses know to ice" ..." the heart will BARK" and the whole last paragraph..specially the last two sentences...I think you miss some words for those sentences to make sense.

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